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Rape The Sky

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Smoke chokes out the sky
like someone in a sleeper.
The more the light is choked out,
the darkness only gets deeper.

The white fluffy clouds
are dyed an inky black.
Because of all the saturation,
it will never go back.

Great towers pierce the sky above,
digging in with black fangs.
Their venom spreads continuously
and life is consumed by hunger pangs.

Coughing gases and choking sulphur
mix with the darkness created.
Acid comes down in a fury,
with its intensity unabated.

The green land below turns yellow,
like the sulphur in the sky.
All creatures who drink the rain
are destined to slowly die.

The unnatural heat billowing
and roaring within the walls
enslave all resources around it
and forces all to devolve.

It is as if the earth itself
was reversing its transformation.
All who prepare are still swept away
by this inevitable deformation.
Second poem since the release of my book. The next book is being started as of the posting of this poem...

Critiques are encouraged. 

Preview of what's in the book here: jjm239.deviantart.com/gallery/…
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Loftydreams101's avatar
This was a very stirring poem. Great work!